If I was in charge of school I would first change the
teachers. I would make the teachers be more of themselves then to have them all
treating the seniors like babies. I believe that if the teachers were more of themselves
and were more open to the student then the relationship between each other
would be more positive and this would make it more easier for the student to
understand their learning being given. I also think this way the teachers would
be able to teach the student in a more easy and fun. In future I believe that
when a student goes off into the real world the chances of them becoming more sociable
would be higher and would treat other teachers more of a friend then just being
a teacher.
I would change the time school starts. So far I think that
the starting and finishing of the school is too messy and confusing. There is
also the problem of after school activities, when school finishes at 3:25 and a
activity starts at 3:30, this is a major problem. So I would have 2 fixed
school times. On Monday – Wednesday school starts at 9:00am – 3:00pm. Having a standard
time throughout these days would help out with getting up in the morning and
finishing at the same time as other schools. Then on Thursday – Friday school
would start from 8:45 am – 2:45pm. I got to be honest. From 3 days in the week
we would be wide away with our school work and by the end of the day finishing
early and having a head start into the weekend is a treat into our hard work
and personal life.
Lastly I would change the stupid prices of the school tuck
shop, especially healthy food. This school charges too much for food and I feel
ripped off. It’s a strain on the parents having to pay for the kid’s lunches at
school. The price of food should be put down due to the difficulties of daily living
and spending on food. These prices are UNFAIR. Bananas, apples, peaches, plums,
oranges should only cost a few cents each the lower these prices are the healthier
and more alert the kids of alfriston college can get. I don’t mind about the
price of fatty foods for those prices should be out of reach. I think the fatty
foods and surgery sweets should be put at high price to say the those types of
foods are just treats.
This is really well written. There are a few minor errors that you should go back and edit, but for the most part you have done well. Your ideas are really well explained. Like :)
ReplyDeleteOne problem though - you need to get your poems up on here.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteI see my errors and will change them when I post my poem.
I will post my poem some time in the weekend
Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI see my errors and will change them when I post my poem.
I will post my poem some time in the weekend.
Violet, what is going on?? You have SO MUCH home learning to catch up on. You haven't attempted the stuff I set during the holidays. Get on to it please, or come see me if you are having trouble.
DeleteI can't help you if I don't see any work or you don't talk to me about it.